A3 Critique

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Critique Notes:

It was suggested that I make my flying car bigger so it takes up more space. People also thought I should code it so the car changes to something else once it goes behind the house. The car also wasn't a super convincing object for my classmates so they suggested making it other things such as, a bike or the doctor who police box. After the critique, I think adding more elements to the sky to create a more compelling experience. 

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